Post by abyss on Oct 27, 2008 20:15:38 GMT -5
Characters involved:
Yuma, male adol. cougar
Chesmu, male cougar
Ankita, female adol. cougar
Chandani, female adol. cougar
Nium, female cougar
Setting: Eroded Well
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This landscape is made of black basalt stone whose edges have been smoothed and rounded by wind and sand, its surface pitted by holes of varying sizes. There are tiny little niches filled with dirt, in which tufts of grass and flowering plants grow. Hollows large enough to hold anything from a rabbit to a sleeping coyote, from which the wind sweeps the dirt before any plants can anchor it. Amidst them all is one single, giant hole bored into the bedrock at a peculiar angle, large enough for many creatures to bury head and shoulders in. Deep enough to hold water in all but the driest of summers, tepid though that liquid might be; its depths are clear, a scattering of gravel dotting the base of the pit.
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As the last traces of sunlight fade from the sky, Yuma sits at the edge of the well, watching the moon rise. The snow has stopped and the clouds have cleared for the moment, revealing a blue-gray twilight sky. The color reminds him of the odd cat he met earlier, and sends him into idle reflections. By this time in the day, hunger is usually driving him to hunt, but for now he still feels satisfied from his mid-day snack. (Mmmm, squirrel!)
Chesmu is not in his best of ways. He stalks over to the well to get a drink. The nerve of that outsider to assume he has any authority over him! He dips his head into the well and starts to drink. He finds it a good thing that the Amaranth have a claim to the well.
Yuma notices his father as he approaches the well. The sight brings a smile to his face. "Hey dad," he calls, not yet noticing anything amiss. He's just glad to see that the older male is moving around freely, recovered from his injuries.
Chesmu has recovered quite a bit. At least physically. He looks up and over at Yuma. Finally he walks over to his son, who he remains proud of. "Greetings, Yuma."
The adolescent does not wait for Chesmu to walk all the way over to him. He gets to his paws and meets his father halfway, nuzzling him. Has Yuma gotten /bigger/ since Chesmu last saw him? It seems possible, even though it's only been a few days. "How's it going?" he asks, glancing briefly over the other cougar's fresh scars. "Looks like you're all healed up."
Chesmu looks himself over. He takes a deep breath and lets it out. "Yes... Yes I suppose I have healed." Chesmu says. He takes a deep breath. "You've grown a bit. Only three days, must have hit a growth spurt."
Yuma sinks down on his haunches, still looking speculatively at Chesmu. To him, his father looks... tired. Yuma puts this off as him worrying about Nayeli. "Really?" The young male blinks down at himself, peering at his big paws, before shrugging and answering, "Maybe." He looks back up at Chesmu again and continues, "I met someone named Adoun earlier, and I gave him my permission to stay with us until winter. He said his kind is called Russian Blue... he looks like a cougar, but he's very small, cub-sized, with grayish-colored fur." Yuma chuckles, as if he's having a hard time believing this story himself. "I'm pretty sure he's an adult, though."
Chesmu frowns. "That's not a cougar, that's a cat." Chesmu says. "It could be this... Adoun... was one of the traitors." Chesmu is referring to any animal who likes being domesticated to a more... human lifestyle."
Yuma tilts his head slightly. "A cat?" Chesmu's second remark causes him to blink and splay his ears, looking surprised. "Traitors? What do you mean?"
Chesmu didn;t realize Yuma hadn't realized. "Those who are comfortable to consort with humans."
Now that is something Yuma had never thought to consider. Blinking again, he mulls the idea over, and after a moment he slowly shakes his head. "I don't think so. He was very friendly. He acted just like one of us." Well... except for his complete indifference on the subject of territory lines. Hmm. The male frowns, deep creases appearing on his tawny brow.
Chesmu hmmms. "Very well. If you don't believe he is one of them, then I will believe the same." Chesmu says. "I think it is time we speak about... unacceptable cougars."
Yuma nods. Adoun may have consorted with humans in the past, but the cougar still does not believe the 'cat' (as Chesmu called him) poses any threat to the tribe, one way or the other. He'll investigate later. For now, however, he keeps his attention on his father, perking his ears as the conversation shifts elsewhere. Maybe this has some relation to the other subject he was going to bring up: an unfamiliar scent he noticed while patrolling. "Who are you talking about?"
Chesmu clears his throat. "A large male I had been suspicious of when I was still Chieftain... he is not friend of the tribe, nor is the female he travels with apparently." Chesmu says, talking about Marupa and Sara. "They must not be allowed to continue on these lands."
Yuma looks a bit confused until Chesmu mentions the female. The scent he found was a day or two old, but he can say with certainty that it /definitely/ did not belong to a male. "So there's two of them? I found a scent while patrolling, but it was a female's..." And naturally, that had not bothered him in the least. "If they're not friends of the tribe, then what are they doing here?"
Madness would be apparent to Yuma if he only suspected his father had begun a downward spiral into it. As it happens, Chesmu doesn't even appear remotely unhinged. "Causing trouble. Meddling." Chesmu says. "Dangerous speak." He doesn't even mention the nightmare he had with his mother.
After the whole incident with Kein and Nayeli, Yuma should have learned not to confide in his father, but to keep his own counsel. Unfortunately, it's difficult for him to break old habits. He is used to consulting with Chesmu, who has been his teacher as well as his father, and he still values the former Chieftain's opinion. "What kind of trouble?" Yuma asks, still frowning. "Have you seen them?"
Chesmu nods. "The male tried to attack me and the female questioned my..." Chesmu says. "Questioned my integrity here in the tribe." Chesmu's eye twitches when he says "tribe."
Yuma /really/ looks surprised when his father mentions being attacked. "He attacked you? Why didn't you say that sooner?" he exclaims, now feeling more than slightly stupid for babbling about the miniature cougar he met. Rising back to his paws, the male casts a glance around, looking away from Chesmu long enough to miss the odd twitching of his eye. "Where? When?"
"Yesterday when I was doing border patrol." Chesmu says. "They attack one of the tribe, they would attack anyone in the tribe. Nothing would stop them from taking an opportunity to harm *you,* for example. You're still young. Inexperienced." Another eyetwitch. "Weak."
Yuma turns his head to look back at Chesmu. His mouth falls open, and for a moment all he can do is gape at his father in shock. How could Chesmu walk up to him so calmly, a day after being attacked, and casually mention it in conversation? "I... I'm not weak!" Yuma declares, obviously flustered. The older male's strange behavior is really throwing him off stride. "I'm not gonna let some big male just show up here and attack my family!" Chesmu said that the male was traveling with a female, but that does not reassure him of his sisters' safety; indeed, he has forgotten about the female entirely. Somewhere nearby, no more than a day's journey away, there is a threat. A rival. The cougar, normally so even-tempered, grits his teeth as anger floods through his body.
Chesmu looks at Yuma. "Of course you shouldn't let this danger stand." Chesmu says a little more gently. "But you are significantly smaller than the male. You're not yet an adult." Chesmu eyetwitches again, and then speaks clearly, enunciating each sound in each word of what he says next: "You... will... need... my... help."
Something is seriously wrong with this situation. There are so many red flags, but the anger follows surprise so suddenly that Yuma has no time to think. He is no longer looking at Chesmu, staring off into the distance as though expecting the other male to appear before him. "I don't care how much bigger he is," Yuma answers, in a low growl that sounds nothing like his normal voice, and he begins to move past Chesmu, intending to head in the direction his father arrived from. He has to find his sisters, make sure they're safe, and then begin the search. It may very well be true that he cannot defeat the rogue alone... but that does not concern him.
Chesmu watches his son start to leave and he walks over to him. "What do you think you are doing?" Chesmu says, then walks in front of Yuma. "I have told you... you're not..." Eyetwitch. "... worthy to take on a superior opponent. I wouldn't want my oldest son to get killed. Not to be fought alone."
Yuma stops only when Chesmu cuts him off, blocking his path. There is fire in his eyes as he focuses on his father, absorbing what he says. Such words from Chesmu, his mentor, are completely unexpected. "Not worthy?" Yuma repeats in disbelief, with anger still evident in his growling voice. "You waited to tell me about this. /Now/ you're going to stop me and tell me I can't fight him?"
Chesmu still stands in his son's way. "You're still too young... son." Chesmu says. "You're not fit to fight battles..." Eyetwitch. "...just yet. If you see him... tell him he is unwanted and that he must be off. He may listen." Chesmu finds it hard to control the twitch of his eye. "You want to be Chieftain, then you much to learn and I... " Eyetwitch. "...can teach you everything you need to know about being the Chieftain."
By blocking his way and telling Yuma to his face that he cannot fight the rogue, Chesmu risks drawing the young Chieftain's rage to himself. Gritting his teeth, Yuma struggles to suppress an overwhelming urge to lash out at his father. He is shocked, insulted, and utterly furious all at once. How dare his father suggest that he is unable to protect the tribe! "If he's not already gone," Yuma snarls, "He's gonna regret it. Get out of my way, dad. /Now./"
Chesmu takes a deep breath. There must be some way to control Yuma. Chesmu realizes this now that being a concerned parent is not going to do the trick. "Yuma... listen to me very carefully. This rogue is even bigger and stronger than I am. How can you expect to protect your sisters if... " Twitch. "...you do not let me help you and get killed? Our position is not to seek out... enemies. If he is gone, he is gone."
Yuma closes his eyes for a moment, literally seeing red as his eyelids press tightly shut. His claws unsheathe, sinking into the ground, tearing it as he'd surely enjoy tearing into the hide of the big rogue. Usually the best way to reach Yuma is by appealing to his sense of reason, but the cougar is having a hard time thinking clearly right now. If what Chesmu says is true -- the stranger has attacked a member of the tribe -- then the time for talking has passed. When his eyes open again, he looks no less angry than he was before. "I have to find out if he's still here," Yuma insists. All adolescent bravado, pumped up with anger and adrenaline, he is unable to believe that the rogue could kill him.
Chesmu finds this to be desirable. He may not be able to become Chieftain again, but if he could establish some sort of control over Yuma... "Let us go together. How does that sound. We could have a little... " Twitch. "Father and son time."
"I didn't say you couldn't come with me!" Yuma was not denying his father's assistance. He just doesn't understand why they're standing there talking instead of /acting/, especially when so much time has passed already. Even if Chesmu told him where they fought, the dangerous rogue could be practically /anywhere/ by now, in or outside of the territory. Ears flattened, tail lashing jerkily from side to side, Yuma tries to move around his father again. He'll comb the entire territory to make sure there are no strangers lurking.
Instead of getting in Yuma's way, Chesmu walks alongside him. "How proud I am of you." Chesmu says. "If this tribe were more patriarchical... I would have been proud to have you succeed me, my son."
Yuma, male adol. cougar
Chesmu, male cougar
Ankita, female adol. cougar
Chandani, female adol. cougar
Nium, female cougar
Setting: Eroded Well
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This landscape is made of black basalt stone whose edges have been smoothed and rounded by wind and sand, its surface pitted by holes of varying sizes. There are tiny little niches filled with dirt, in which tufts of grass and flowering plants grow. Hollows large enough to hold anything from a rabbit to a sleeping coyote, from which the wind sweeps the dirt before any plants can anchor it. Amidst them all is one single, giant hole bored into the bedrock at a peculiar angle, large enough for many creatures to bury head and shoulders in. Deep enough to hold water in all but the driest of summers, tepid though that liquid might be; its depths are clear, a scattering of gravel dotting the base of the pit.
================================================================================
As the last traces of sunlight fade from the sky, Yuma sits at the edge of the well, watching the moon rise. The snow has stopped and the clouds have cleared for the moment, revealing a blue-gray twilight sky. The color reminds him of the odd cat he met earlier, and sends him into idle reflections. By this time in the day, hunger is usually driving him to hunt, but for now he still feels satisfied from his mid-day snack. (Mmmm, squirrel!)
Chesmu is not in his best of ways. He stalks over to the well to get a drink. The nerve of that outsider to assume he has any authority over him! He dips his head into the well and starts to drink. He finds it a good thing that the Amaranth have a claim to the well.
Yuma notices his father as he approaches the well. The sight brings a smile to his face. "Hey dad," he calls, not yet noticing anything amiss. He's just glad to see that the older male is moving around freely, recovered from his injuries.
Chesmu has recovered quite a bit. At least physically. He looks up and over at Yuma. Finally he walks over to his son, who he remains proud of. "Greetings, Yuma."
The adolescent does not wait for Chesmu to walk all the way over to him. He gets to his paws and meets his father halfway, nuzzling him. Has Yuma gotten /bigger/ since Chesmu last saw him? It seems possible, even though it's only been a few days. "How's it going?" he asks, glancing briefly over the other cougar's fresh scars. "Looks like you're all healed up."
Chesmu looks himself over. He takes a deep breath and lets it out. "Yes... Yes I suppose I have healed." Chesmu says. He takes a deep breath. "You've grown a bit. Only three days, must have hit a growth spurt."
Yuma sinks down on his haunches, still looking speculatively at Chesmu. To him, his father looks... tired. Yuma puts this off as him worrying about Nayeli. "Really?" The young male blinks down at himself, peering at his big paws, before shrugging and answering, "Maybe." He looks back up at Chesmu again and continues, "I met someone named Adoun earlier, and I gave him my permission to stay with us until winter. He said his kind is called Russian Blue... he looks like a cougar, but he's very small, cub-sized, with grayish-colored fur." Yuma chuckles, as if he's having a hard time believing this story himself. "I'm pretty sure he's an adult, though."
Chesmu frowns. "That's not a cougar, that's a cat." Chesmu says. "It could be this... Adoun... was one of the traitors." Chesmu is referring to any animal who likes being domesticated to a more... human lifestyle."
Yuma tilts his head slightly. "A cat?" Chesmu's second remark causes him to blink and splay his ears, looking surprised. "Traitors? What do you mean?"
Chesmu didn;t realize Yuma hadn't realized. "Those who are comfortable to consort with humans."
Now that is something Yuma had never thought to consider. Blinking again, he mulls the idea over, and after a moment he slowly shakes his head. "I don't think so. He was very friendly. He acted just like one of us." Well... except for his complete indifference on the subject of territory lines. Hmm. The male frowns, deep creases appearing on his tawny brow.
Chesmu hmmms. "Very well. If you don't believe he is one of them, then I will believe the same." Chesmu says. "I think it is time we speak about... unacceptable cougars."
Yuma nods. Adoun may have consorted with humans in the past, but the cougar still does not believe the 'cat' (as Chesmu called him) poses any threat to the tribe, one way or the other. He'll investigate later. For now, however, he keeps his attention on his father, perking his ears as the conversation shifts elsewhere. Maybe this has some relation to the other subject he was going to bring up: an unfamiliar scent he noticed while patrolling. "Who are you talking about?"
Chesmu clears his throat. "A large male I had been suspicious of when I was still Chieftain... he is not friend of the tribe, nor is the female he travels with apparently." Chesmu says, talking about Marupa and Sara. "They must not be allowed to continue on these lands."
Yuma looks a bit confused until Chesmu mentions the female. The scent he found was a day or two old, but he can say with certainty that it /definitely/ did not belong to a male. "So there's two of them? I found a scent while patrolling, but it was a female's..." And naturally, that had not bothered him in the least. "If they're not friends of the tribe, then what are they doing here?"
Madness would be apparent to Yuma if he only suspected his father had begun a downward spiral into it. As it happens, Chesmu doesn't even appear remotely unhinged. "Causing trouble. Meddling." Chesmu says. "Dangerous speak." He doesn't even mention the nightmare he had with his mother.
After the whole incident with Kein and Nayeli, Yuma should have learned not to confide in his father, but to keep his own counsel. Unfortunately, it's difficult for him to break old habits. He is used to consulting with Chesmu, who has been his teacher as well as his father, and he still values the former Chieftain's opinion. "What kind of trouble?" Yuma asks, still frowning. "Have you seen them?"
Chesmu nods. "The male tried to attack me and the female questioned my..." Chesmu says. "Questioned my integrity here in the tribe." Chesmu's eye twitches when he says "tribe."
Yuma /really/ looks surprised when his father mentions being attacked. "He attacked you? Why didn't you say that sooner?" he exclaims, now feeling more than slightly stupid for babbling about the miniature cougar he met. Rising back to his paws, the male casts a glance around, looking away from Chesmu long enough to miss the odd twitching of his eye. "Where? When?"
"Yesterday when I was doing border patrol." Chesmu says. "They attack one of the tribe, they would attack anyone in the tribe. Nothing would stop them from taking an opportunity to harm *you,* for example. You're still young. Inexperienced." Another eyetwitch. "Weak."
Yuma turns his head to look back at Chesmu. His mouth falls open, and for a moment all he can do is gape at his father in shock. How could Chesmu walk up to him so calmly, a day after being attacked, and casually mention it in conversation? "I... I'm not weak!" Yuma declares, obviously flustered. The older male's strange behavior is really throwing him off stride. "I'm not gonna let some big male just show up here and attack my family!" Chesmu said that the male was traveling with a female, but that does not reassure him of his sisters' safety; indeed, he has forgotten about the female entirely. Somewhere nearby, no more than a day's journey away, there is a threat. A rival. The cougar, normally so even-tempered, grits his teeth as anger floods through his body.
Chesmu looks at Yuma. "Of course you shouldn't let this danger stand." Chesmu says a little more gently. "But you are significantly smaller than the male. You're not yet an adult." Chesmu eyetwitches again, and then speaks clearly, enunciating each sound in each word of what he says next: "You... will... need... my... help."
Something is seriously wrong with this situation. There are so many red flags, but the anger follows surprise so suddenly that Yuma has no time to think. He is no longer looking at Chesmu, staring off into the distance as though expecting the other male to appear before him. "I don't care how much bigger he is," Yuma answers, in a low growl that sounds nothing like his normal voice, and he begins to move past Chesmu, intending to head in the direction his father arrived from. He has to find his sisters, make sure they're safe, and then begin the search. It may very well be true that he cannot defeat the rogue alone... but that does not concern him.
Chesmu watches his son start to leave and he walks over to him. "What do you think you are doing?" Chesmu says, then walks in front of Yuma. "I have told you... you're not..." Eyetwitch. "... worthy to take on a superior opponent. I wouldn't want my oldest son to get killed. Not to be fought alone."
Yuma stops only when Chesmu cuts him off, blocking his path. There is fire in his eyes as he focuses on his father, absorbing what he says. Such words from Chesmu, his mentor, are completely unexpected. "Not worthy?" Yuma repeats in disbelief, with anger still evident in his growling voice. "You waited to tell me about this. /Now/ you're going to stop me and tell me I can't fight him?"
Chesmu still stands in his son's way. "You're still too young... son." Chesmu says. "You're not fit to fight battles..." Eyetwitch. "...just yet. If you see him... tell him he is unwanted and that he must be off. He may listen." Chesmu finds it hard to control the twitch of his eye. "You want to be Chieftain, then you much to learn and I... " Eyetwitch. "...can teach you everything you need to know about being the Chieftain."
By blocking his way and telling Yuma to his face that he cannot fight the rogue, Chesmu risks drawing the young Chieftain's rage to himself. Gritting his teeth, Yuma struggles to suppress an overwhelming urge to lash out at his father. He is shocked, insulted, and utterly furious all at once. How dare his father suggest that he is unable to protect the tribe! "If he's not already gone," Yuma snarls, "He's gonna regret it. Get out of my way, dad. /Now./"
Chesmu takes a deep breath. There must be some way to control Yuma. Chesmu realizes this now that being a concerned parent is not going to do the trick. "Yuma... listen to me very carefully. This rogue is even bigger and stronger than I am. How can you expect to protect your sisters if... " Twitch. "...you do not let me help you and get killed? Our position is not to seek out... enemies. If he is gone, he is gone."
Yuma closes his eyes for a moment, literally seeing red as his eyelids press tightly shut. His claws unsheathe, sinking into the ground, tearing it as he'd surely enjoy tearing into the hide of the big rogue. Usually the best way to reach Yuma is by appealing to his sense of reason, but the cougar is having a hard time thinking clearly right now. If what Chesmu says is true -- the stranger has attacked a member of the tribe -- then the time for talking has passed. When his eyes open again, he looks no less angry than he was before. "I have to find out if he's still here," Yuma insists. All adolescent bravado, pumped up with anger and adrenaline, he is unable to believe that the rogue could kill him.
Chesmu finds this to be desirable. He may not be able to become Chieftain again, but if he could establish some sort of control over Yuma... "Let us go together. How does that sound. We could have a little... " Twitch. "Father and son time."
"I didn't say you couldn't come with me!" Yuma was not denying his father's assistance. He just doesn't understand why they're standing there talking instead of /acting/, especially when so much time has passed already. Even if Chesmu told him where they fought, the dangerous rogue could be practically /anywhere/ by now, in or outside of the territory. Ears flattened, tail lashing jerkily from side to side, Yuma tries to move around his father again. He'll comb the entire territory to make sure there are no strangers lurking.
Instead of getting in Yuma's way, Chesmu walks alongside him. "How proud I am of you." Chesmu says. "If this tribe were more patriarchical... I would have been proud to have you succeed me, my son."